Can you rate my resume 1-10 and give input on any
Changes I need to make. I have been searching for
another job for the past 4 months and I think
something in my resume may be turning away
potiential employers. Just need some help, Thanks!
PROFILE
Work history in Office Support for over 10 years and Human Resources Assistance
Strong Customer Service personality
Computer Systems: Windows 95/97/ME, Macintosh
Proficient in: Excel, Access, Outlook, PowerPoint, and People Soft, STS
EDUCATION
2002-Cambridge College, Cambridge MA
B.A. Psychology/Juvenile Justice
1997-2000 Roxbury Community College
A.S. Early Childhood Education
EMPLOYMENT
4/02-12/03
HQ Global Workplaces, Boston MA
Receptionist
Designed a client reference guide to aide the telecommunications specialists.
Greet & assist clients in any capacity needed.
Process company & client invoices & checks.
Set up and breakdown of video conferences.
Conducted LCD presentations & T1 set up.
Answered Multi lined system for company.
Enter billing in to People Soft system.
Typed documents for company and clients.
Telecommunications Specialist
Sort incoming and outgoing company and client mailings.
Answer multi lined system for company and clients.
Assist in phone line connections.
Faxing & photocopying.
12/00-1/02
Boston Financial Data Services, Boston MA
Account Specialist
Answer client inquires on personal mutual fund accounts.
Maintain accounts with changes and redemptions daily.
Extensive knowledge of funds and prospectus.
Answer multi-line system.
3/00-12/00
CASCAP, Inc, Cambridge MA
Human Resources Assistant
Co-designed and maintained resume data base, which kept an accurate account of all incoming resume and new hirer files.
Processed and filed hard copy documents for new hires & health insurance.
Distribute incoming resumes & candidate correspondence.
Conducted reference verification call outs.
Process CORI & ESS back ground checks.
9/99-3/00
The Boston Globe/Sunday Department, Boston
Office Assistant MA (Internship)
Enter prospective articles in intranet system for editors approval.
Interview informants for article information.
Answer multi line system.
Maintained previous article logs.
Filing & Faxing.
You may want to include a career objective heading (you want to be specific about the type of position you are seeking). Then under your profile, you want to highlight the skills which are relevant to the type of position you are seeking. Make sure that you use present verb tense for job duties in your current position only. For your previous positions, use past tense. Also, I would delete the the phrase "typed documents" and change to "prepared documents". I would also delete "extensive knowledge of funds..." as a job duty. That is something that would be listed under your professional profile. Someone mentioned that you should include references but that is bad advice. Never list references unless specifically asked by a potential employer. Instead, you should note "reference available upon request". Overall, I would give it a 7.
Renee, I think you have a good start, but it would be helpful to review the format as well. This site Razume.com makes it easy to upload resume then block information you don't want people seeing. Hope that helps! http://answers.yahoo.com/question/accuse_write?qid=20060726123746AAUXO6V&kid=OoRLU3HjIjMT6BfIXFwA&s=comm&date=2007-12-20+05%3A43%3A37&.crumb=
It should be in this order:
Employment
Education
Skills
get rid of the profile
under skills you didnt list microsoft word. thats the most important.
typing speed?
I have been a recruiter for 5 years. If you want help, email it to me in word format and i will make the changes.
One thing that I noticed is you have some things written in past tense, and some in present tense. I think they should all be in past tense, unless you are still doing them.
i'd say an 8, you have the right idea, just need some help organizing it.
looks fine a Little long
Usually the objective and the employment history is listed first, education, special skills (such as your ocmputer skille syou listed) and the at least three references... Ont he job you listed filing, faxing, stc etc..basic office equipment.. In most businessed these are indetified as copy machines, fac machines; etc.. I hope this helps
Id give it an 8 If you get a professional resume maker. it helps you with better heading names and formats. But looks good
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